Last night, about 8:30, we arrived back home - whew! - after 4400 miles and 21 days, one graduation from US Army basic training, one wedding, visits with brother and aunt, not to mention Gramma's azaleas (not going to mention...).
I published Mercenaries: A Love Story on March 21. So far, it's sold two copies to people who are not family or friends - or if they are, they haven't admitted it. I hope that's not the case! It's in the Select program, but no borrows, so far.
This leads to a question: on Amazon, is there a way to see what the book's page views are? On Smashwords, the samples downloaded stat hinted at that, but I haven't found that for Amazon yet. If there are no page views, that would lead me in the direction of trying to increase visibility, but if there are page views that don't get converted, that implies that either the cover or the blurb aren't doing their job. Or at $4.99, the price is too high. Different things to fix. If there are page views, reviews might help, but there aren't any of those as yet.
With 35K words (about a third) of one WIP being looked at by a beta reader, and 130K words of a second WIP going out to a second reader, I have a minute or two to think on these things. If only I knew what to work on... If any readers feel they could provide an opinion on either the cover (visible to the right) or the description (below), please feel free. I won't hold anything you offer against you. Of course, you could say, work on everything... but I'd like to focus.
Description
Mercenaries: A Love Story
Beckie Sverdupe, typical high-school student and accomplished
equestrienne, has a best friend, a younger brother, and no plans beyond
homework and the upcoming pep rally.
Then, she is kidnapped to be
buried alive. Her strength and resourcefulness during that ordeal
causes the enigmatic young mercenary, Ian Jamse, to ask for her help in
rescuing another abducted girl. During spring break, she and her best
friend play exotic dancer in London and, within a day, find themselves
being massaged in a Italian villa! The sex-trader is thwarted this time,
but he continues to ply his evil trade in San Diego by hijacking a
middle-school school bus.
Beckie chooses to put herself back on
the stage, within the slaver’s grasp, to free the California girls.
Jamse sees financial gain. The two of them chase the fiend from London
to Arizona to Thailand, where Beckie learns what she really wants from
life.
This is Mercenaries: A Love Story complete. All four stories are here in one volume.
Bonus! An excerpt from Freedom No Matter, the next book in this series.
Mercenaries: A Love Story is recommended for 16+ for language and mature situations
The book is just over 153K words and it's not available in paper. Does anyone think having a 500 page book available would add to its success?